Friday, June 2, 2017

Joanna's writing piece

This piece of writing, is from a work shop, we were playing the card game, which is called Game Of Awesome, and we got to pick a card that we wanted to write about.

Unstoppable The Prime Minister

The day I wanted to be Prime Minister was a bust. I just got one One! One! vote for me and that was my Mum. Why I didn’t get one from my Dad was because he had died a year ago. Now the so called Mr Ped What. Has the job, and now he is making these silly rules, like cut down the trees and no pets because I’m allergic to them. Give me all your money and much more I don't want to mention. But I’m a rule breaker a have a dog a cat and a lot more pets than you can imagine, I have a pot plant tree and $300 money. This is what I think of the new Prime Minister. UNSTOPPABLE !



I hope you enjoyed my writing, I hope you like to write.

1 comment:

  1. I enjoyed your story. What a terrible world it would be without trees and pets. Well done. Mum

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